Nothing motivates a person to work quick like the threat of Don hanging around and breathing down your neck. It’s hard to say which is worse… the long stretches where he stares at you in judgmental silence, or the horrible moments when he feels the need to pipe up and offer ‘friendly advice.’
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This is a very sad time for Ten
I feel for you sir.
Kiva seems to be enjoying it, however XD
I don’t think Kiva is enjoying Ten’s pain. I think she knew how it was going to go down as soon as Ten started talking to (girl with the ear tattoos…don’t remember her name) and she’s been waiting for her chance to intervene. Kiva has hated tattoo girl’s guts forever and I think she’s been timing her attack. This is the perfect excuse (and honestly, who doesn’t want to see tattoo girl taken down a notch??)
Aww, come on. I really like Jana though. You don’t have to be too hard on her.
I agree with Anon, what’s wrong with Jana? She’s a nice person and good friend.
To be fair, I never said what it was she was enjoying, just “it” which happens to be the topic of this particular page, letting Jana down.
She’s pretty neat.
And yea… What’s with the dislike of Jana
Yeah I didn’t think you were trying to say Kiva was being sadistic. I was just sharing my interpretation of what was going on. As for Jana, I believe she was gossiping about Ten and Jovi on one of the previous pages. She seems like the kind of person who sticks up for you when you’re around, but cuts you down after you leave.
I think that was Min gossiping, but thanks to the “Whisper Game” by the time it got to Jana, it was something different.
I concur with Mischka. I think she’s grinning from schadenfreude at Jana’s dismay and discomfort. Thoroughly enjoying it. If Jana likes Ten because she likes him and Not because he has powerful friends, then Kiiv’s off base, but still likes seeing her suffer, we are assuming because she still remembers What happened on page #176, …
Man I guess this is “Hurt the Hero” week huh…
See, I’ve been thinking about this comic today, I agree with Mischka. I just keep getting this idea that the rest of the squad, after Ten shoots down Jovi/Jana, keeps seeing him be super unreasonably nice to someone who hates him. Won’t they all get the idea he’s masochistically attracted to her or something? Just a thought that occurred.
Malaiki: “you are rude,obnoctious, and cruel to people who are just trying to like you.. you must be one of us” rub rub rub
Maybe I’m crazy but it seems to me that if Ten explained the situation correctly, nobody could blame him. After all, it’s just “how he is”, not something he did deliberately. But I guess the kilm are just as unreasonable, when disappointed, as humans. Yes?
Geneseepaws, thanks for reminding me of that page:
http://www.kahmith.com/2011/06/16/176-cooling-down-burning-up/
I was curious if Jana is (partly!) sticking up for Ten, as a way of showing off how big and tough she is, something like boys do in our world. Since the girls are bigger than the boys there, is this a thing, or am I reading too much into it?